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THE BABY BEAR OF PERSUASION




Recently, my friend shared an article on Facebook about a group of people who resist the counsel to wear masks, even when it comes from the top leaders of their religion. 😵


Now, both of my brothers have had COVID, thankfully without complications. One brother got infected by his stupid roommate, who had symptoms but dragged his feet on getting tested and still hung out with people in the meantime. I've left open my offer to punch said roommate in the face, so you can guess how I feel about the people in the aforementioned article. (In the interests of sparing everyone's blood pressure, I'm not going to share it.)


After commenting "What. Is. Wrong. With. People" on my friend's post, I started thinking. What goes on in people's minds that makes them so defiant about wearing a mask? It just doesn't make sense to me.


I took the question to Google and eventually ended up at this article. While it's not specific to dealing with mask debates—which, unless you have to enforce a policy, are probably not worth getting into anyway—it does make a compelling case for how to tell whether you're going Papa Bear (too much), Mama Bear (too little), or Baby Bear (just enough) with the supporting evidence for an argument. Outside of school assignments, we usually don't have a required number of points to make or sources to cite, so these guidelines can help us make sure we're on target.


Interestingly, I've found myself unconsciously using a similar technique when describing things in my fiction. Three sentences max is usually about right to build a clear picture without bogging down the story.


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And please—wear a mask.


Write on,

Candice


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